Finally after much research and deliberation I finished.
I needed to see where I wanted to first go so I brainstormed a bit more.
I did a few more sketches to begin:
My re-design took in to account all the criticism and took out the elements that did not work.
I immediately used the four panel gird in my sketches.
I
first returned to the drawing board to better lay out my grid. I
removed the solid three panel on both sides and instead put four panels
on the back so I could better explain "design-thinking."
Even
at this point I was unsure of how to fix it. I went through
trial-and-error until I got a somewhat presentable product. And even
then...
Here is my final design:
(will upload when I find non-corrupt file)
A few more tweaks with the pictures were all that was left.
I
went with the white because I thought it was better than picking a
solid background color. I also changed up the grid in the back and fixed
the photos so they were better quality.
The grid on the back I think worked especially better than before. It removed the three panel grid and allowed for me to show step-by-step the design process. Incredibly meta if I might add.
This design is far from perfect but for some reason this brochure is beyond me. I am not sure why I struggled so much with this one but it really gave me a huge appreciation for the time and energy put into these designs. Kudos to those who do this for a living.
Monday, October 27, 2014
Sunday, October 26, 2014
Brochure Post 2
Now I stuck to basically the three-panel layout for the entire three brochure schemes. I am not sure why but to me it seemed like the best idea, I also did not even think to change up the grids.
I really liked blue so a majority of my ideas took into account that color.
Disregard the hexagon, it's ridiculous.
Design One:
Design Two:
Design Three:
The feedback was thus: too much color, weird color scheme, blank space, and a solid background color.
And I would say I have to agree, it wasn't until I actually heard people say it that I affirmed my suspicions.If someone picked up this brochure it wouldn't be any revolutionary, or anything that was designed properly. Or something I could claim to be able to sell.
But much like design thinking there is not good design only good re-design.
So I went back to the drawing board.
I really liked blue so a majority of my ideas took into account that color.
Disregard the hexagon, it's ridiculous.
Design One:
Design Two:
Design Three:
The feedback was thus: too much color, weird color scheme, blank space, and a solid background color.
And I would say I have to agree, it wasn't until I actually heard people say it that I affirmed my suspicions.If someone picked up this brochure it wouldn't be any revolutionary, or anything that was designed properly. Or something I could claim to be able to sell.
But much like design thinking there is not good design only good re-design.
So I went back to the drawing board.
Brochure Post 1
Arguably the hardest project that I have finished in this class, the brochure took me some time to complete. A majority of the difficulty lie in the beginning design scheme. After taking the class for a month I realized many of my ideas may not be suitable for the brochure. I was hard pressed to figure out how to make it work in the end.
I began by thinking up the best way to design the grid. I sketched out what appeared to be the best idea:
I also needed to explain the design process in the brochure, effectively and well put together.
The first panel would have my title, then a picture, followed by a design quote. The next panel would be predominantly introductory text and the inside would feature the explanation of the design process.
I looked at some online to get a better understanding of where I wanted to go. Many of them were much more complicated than I wanted to be, but designs like these I enjoyed:
The hardest part ended up being where to put the text and how I would use it. I wanted to get the message across but was very unsure of the best approach. I needed to explain design thinking in a way that not only made sense but allowed the reader simplicity.
The blue works though, and I ended working that into all three of my first designs. It is a nice color, more calming than others and I didn't want anything too bold in a brochure.
I began by thinking up the best way to design the grid. I sketched out what appeared to be the best idea:
I also needed to explain the design process in the brochure, effectively and well put together.
The first panel would have my title, then a picture, followed by a design quote. The next panel would be predominantly introductory text and the inside would feature the explanation of the design process.
I looked at some online to get a better understanding of where I wanted to go. Many of them were much more complicated than I wanted to be, but designs like these I enjoyed:
But it wouldn't be until the final design that I took the four grid structure into my brochure.
And
went with that grid initially for my rough draft. I put in a solid
background color and put up three different designs for the brochure. The hardest part ended up being where to put the text and how I would use it. I wanted to get the message across but was very unsure of the best approach. I needed to explain design thinking in a way that not only made sense but allowed the reader simplicity.
The blue works though, and I ended working that into all three of my first designs. It is a nice color, more calming than others and I didn't want anything too bold in a brochure.
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